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once upon a time, there lived a girl named Emily. one day, Emily was looking for a new way to have fun.
Emily walked around her house thinking to herself, "hmm, I've already popped some of my balloons, took my beach ball to the beach nearby to bounce on it, and I had a one person celebration with my bouncy castle I got for my birthday last year."
upon passing by her backyard door, Emily noticed some adult sized hoppity hops in her backyard, suddenly she said, "oh, I haven't bounced on my hoppity hops yet. so, why don't I do that to pass the time." almost immediately, Emily put on her ballet tutu and pointe shoes and raced outside to play with one of her 7 hoppity hops.
Emily decided to try out her red hoppity hop first, she got on and decided to bounce around on it. Emily said to herself as she bounced around, "oh my, why haven't I thought of this before. this is so fun." Emily quickly realized that those hoppity hops were her favorite toys.
after bouncing on her red hoppity hop, Emily grabbed her blue hoppity hop and bounced on it. Emily quickly said, "oh, I remember now, I believe I bounced on you to get Simon's attention." Emily was having so much fun, she forgot her best friend Melanie was coming over to have a sleepover with her. after hearing the doorbell ring, Emily bounced straight to her front door to answer it. after opening the door, Melanie said to Emily, "hey. what's new?" Emily responded, "nothing much. just bouncing around on my hoppity hops until you arrived." Melanie quickly realized what her best friend was doing and said, "OMG. I brought over one of my hoppity hops to play with while I am here. you mind if I joined you?" Emily said, "sure. did you bring one of your tutus to wear while you bounce around?" Melanie answered with a big smile, "yes. I brought my pink tutu over." Emily said in response, "well c'mon, put it on and lets bounce."
Melanie and Emily began to bounce around in her backyard having fun. as they bounced around, Melanie noticed some of Emily's other hoppity hops and said, "wow. are those your other hoppity hops?" Emily said, "yeah, I have one in pink, blue, yellow, purple, green, and red." Melanie said, "cool. I have one in orange, pink, purple, green, black, white, and my favorite color, blue." Emily was amazed that her best friend had other hoppity hops to bounce on. then, Melanie said, "don't you just love it when you make you big boobs bounce? I sure love it." Emily responded, "well yeah. that's how we met each other right?" Melanie said, "indeed. I think you were bouncing on your pink hoppity hop when we met. oh I remember that day."
as they were both bouncing, Emily switched from her blue hoppity hop to her purple hoppity hop. Melanie quickly said, "oh, you trying out your purple one?" Emily said, "yeah. in fact this was the one I bounced on during my friend Abagail's easter party." Melanie said, "wow. do you still have your bunny ears?" Emily said, "yeah. every boy here in south springs thinks I am the easter bunny. *giggles* oh I just love getting those boys' attention when I bounce around." Melanie giggled and said, "oh those boys are so easy to charm. that's how I won the heart of Ryan." Emily and Melanie were having such a good time that it began to get late.
after seeing the sunset, Emily said, "c'mon Melanie, its getting late. lets bring all of my hoppity hops inside along with yours." Melanie said, "ok. tomorrow is going to be sooo much fun. hey Emily, you think it would be nice to invite Bella over?" Emily said as she yawned, "yeah. that would be nice. well goodnight Melanie." Melanie responded, "goodnight Emily." with that said, the girls both got ready for bed and dreamed about tomorrow's bouncy day.
the end   
check this story out. hope you like it.
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PokeDragonGirl34 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awzm! It is a good story, but unfortunately it's all I can read right now, I REALLY need to work on my own story
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kingdomheartsventus7 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Photographer
ok. good luck with it.
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PokeDragonGirl34 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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kingdomheartsventus7 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Photographer
ur welcome.
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Louieeeman Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
i like tht story =)
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kingdomheartsventus7 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Photographer
I am glad u do!!!
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Louieeeman Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
need a part 2 w/ bella in it
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Louieeeman Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
can't wait 2 c part 2 w/ Bella
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kingdomheartsventus7 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Photographer
don't worry. I am right now getting ready to work on part 2.
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Louieeeman Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
maybe add boing sounds in dialogue &/or speakings of the characters
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